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Myth of Symmetry

March 9, 2016 16 Comments

It is this myth of symmetry, of which we are given to subscription, on which inclination places its burdensome yoke, from which we learn the impotence of equity, and in which we, ultimately, find our disheartenment. This queer belief that each side of the equation finds solution, its value, in balance, is human, computational error.

Fairness, truly understood, is conclusively unfair. Without balance, it is a fall off a slippery log, that in our deliberate falling away, another might find their footing as they cross. In our struggle for solvency, fearful we might lose ourselves to the shame of subordination, it is, in the end, a question of intent.

There is no disgrace in a decision to yield. There is no yellowed jaundice tainting our free will, our hearts need not become jade stone to find some sort of definement, and they need not demand equality. There is no stature lost in acquiescence.

Contrarily, we become larger through ceding pieces of ourselves so that others might be whole. In our intentional diminishment, in removing the bricks from our mighty walls, surrendering each to those needing affirmation of foundation, weโ€™ve allowed light to pass through, both entering, and radiating outward. Weโ€™ve created a means of egress from our prison of pride, through which we might escape that self weโ€™ve outgrown.


Part of an old writing challenge. The prompt was ‘symmetry’, I think. I dunno. I might not have followed the rules.

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  1. busymindthinking says

    March 9, 2016 at 1:43 am

    Who cares about rules; awesome content.

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    • Eric says

      March 9, 2016 at 1:50 am

      Thank you, Belinda ๐Ÿ™‚ I appreciate you reading this.

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      • busymindthinking says

        March 9, 2016 at 1:59 am

        ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Always my pleasure reading your work.

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  2. thoughtsgather says

    March 9, 2016 at 1:48 am

    Oh…rules. Thanks for this.

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    • Eric says

      March 9, 2016 at 1:52 am

      rules, shmules.. You’re welcome. I’m glad you found something here. I was reading some other old prose-y philosophical stuff, and was surprised to find that I still agree with myself ๐Ÿ˜‰ Mostly.

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      • thoughtsgather says

        March 9, 2016 at 2:08 am

        …. Consistency ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. VictoryInTrouble says

    March 9, 2016 at 1:57 am

    Eric, if I told you every time I want to express my love for your sweet spirit, I think I’d embarrass you. This last paragraph made me smile for its message. When we give of ourselves to make another stronger, yes, we both win, we both become better.

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    • Eric says

      March 9, 2016 at 2:02 am

      Aww shucks, cut that out, you. Thank you, Vic. I’m so glad you liked this.

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      • VictoryInTrouble says

        March 9, 2016 at 2:06 am

        ๐Ÿ˜€ Told ya! ๐Ÿ˜›

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        • Eric says

          March 9, 2016 at 2:12 am

          ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. princenothing says

    March 9, 2016 at 1:40 pm

    Good morning, Eric. I was reading this, and wanted to offer some critical thought. I wouldn’t bother at all, but I so enjoyed the point made in the last paragraph! I think the first paragraph or two went a bit too abstract and the tie-together wasn’t strong, maybe just too expository. Then it got so, so good. I loved jaundice and yielding, and the brick wall simile was perfect visualization. You showcased your vocabulary beautifully, and your love of the language is obvious. Obviously the conclusion was thought-provoking. I think we’re all damned proud and individualists…
    I’m glad to see your writing in my feed each day. – alex

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    • Eric says

      March 9, 2016 at 11:10 pm

      Thanks Alex. I agree, at least partly. This could have been clearer without losing the flow I’d wanted for the piece. It’s a couple years old. Maybe it needs a tune up ๐Ÿ˜‰ I appreciate the honest feedback.

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  5. Lisa R. Palmer says

    March 10, 2016 at 12:25 pm

    Eric, you not following rules?!! I simply can’t imagine that… lol! ๐Ÿ˜‰

    On an ironic self-obsessed side note, I was just having this conversation with myself yesterday, about balance, and how it plays out in people’s lives. And I also threw out the concept of symmetry=balance, though not for the noble reasons you espouse… ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • Eric says

      March 12, 2016 at 1:32 am

      Oh, you can make yourself crazy thinking about these things.. too late for me ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      • Lisa R. Palmer says

        March 12, 2016 at 3:02 am

        Good thing I like “crazy” then… At least my particular version of it anyway…:)

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        • Eric says

          March 12, 2016 at 3:03 am

          Yes, a good thing indeed. I hope you’re having a lovely weekend, Lisa ๐Ÿ™‚

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