There’d been a time when men spoke as oracles, carving nightโs obsidian into black-winged angels with their words’ intricate precision, each fine syllable spilled of their rotten-tooth mouths, poetry, the teeming spit glistening upon the swollen round of their cankerous lips, their poems, incarnate, swelling with life, swimming with notions, gestating before born; we live in the mossy, crimson shadows of their brutal and artful hearts, lovers– we, not poets– in these decades of haste, but small men, trifling blasphemers, on most days. Tho on those rare evenings, magical, on those days, particularly blessed, on those mornings, warm and glorious, we might still recall their tall spirits, we might write a poem– a thing worth remembering, a thing bolder than our vanity, a thing, true, whispered into the lonesome void of another soul.
I can feel the days slide over the precipice into eternity, I can sense a diminishment, on those days that I don’t write.
writinglioness says
Love this. ๐
Eric says
Thank you ๐ I started it late last night, having almost missed a day of writing.
writinglioness says
I understand the feeling. ๐
VictoryInTrouble says
So write!! I like to read you! ๐
Eric says
I did! It’s up there ๐ And thank you. I’m honored whenever you do read whatever it is that I’ve written.
VictoryInTrouble says
I noticed you were absent and I missed you. You shouldn’t be honored because you are way talented but thanks, lol. ?
Eric says
I was only gone a day, I think. Busy week. But yes, I am honored. I’ll always be. I hope you’ve been well during this extended absence :p
VictoryInTrouble says
Smart ass. ?Yes, I’ve been well. I hope the same for you. ?
Eric says
Lol ๐ Good, and thank you, Vic.
VictoryInTrouble says
Have a good night, Eric. ?
mukul chand says
lovely poem
Eric says
Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.
mukul chand says
welcome
jerseydreaming says
Wow, very nice.
Eric says
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading this ๐
Lisa R. Palmer says
Powerful, profound and honest… I think you’ve had one of those moments you speak of here… ๐
Eric says
Good morning, Lisa. Thank you. In keeping with the notion, I deleted a bunch of stuff this morning that was just me fogging up the windows with hot breath. Still more to go and some to be rewritten. I hope the sun is shining on you today, my friend ๐
Lisa R. Palmer says
‘Tis a beautiful spring day here in western NY! ๐
Eric says
Fabulous. It is here as well. Headed out for some sunshine ๐